P1: Hina

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hina's introduction to draven family
invited to the mansion
draven mansion heroic nude marble draven in the foyer
first impression of draven
messaging julian too much information on the mansion
hina's impression of liam. he's too pure and innocent to kiss her. first kiss saved for marriage! what a good boy
alois kisses liam in front of hina
liam explains the kiss
inner rage and feelings of betrayal blamed on alois

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characters that need to have a solid design

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P2: Liam

the demon that destoyed my family: volta
elise's wedding
MTV Cribs draven mansion tour
getting kicked out of the house and draven getting him an apartment
cruel words from his father
liam's beating (a few)
unwillingness to commit. "its not like that"
liam getting his ass destroyed by volta (not lewd), volta name drops alois this last time
liam collecting his belongings and telling alois to stay away from him. liam omits the kiss

non plot focused pages:

censored conversation
piercing alois's ears
disgusting apartment
paying off the cleaners to not clean
lovey dovey elise calls her crush claude
making fun of volta for being claude
planking
harlem shake
blood brothers
elise sees the disgusting aparment
dirty laundry
eyeball licking
harlem plank
nohomo
brillianti ED, seamless scrolling, 3 color outfits, pafa black, liam red, alois white

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being hired and given his name
elise flirting, volta doesnt respond to her
draven killing someone in a hotel room and telling volta to clean it up
draven eventually giving him permission
wedding to elise
elise asking who volta is married to: her or her dad?
hiring the gardener (2)
pages where draven appears godlike
filtering calls from future baby mama and covering draven's tracks
~~giving 3rd dravenchild to elise.~~ (i should not admit it's not theirs)
presenting hina to draven
draven hesitating to waste her on his son
elise telling her father she's watching him when she meets hina
3rd dravenchild with draven
finding santi on draven with a gun to his head, crying. santi is too busy speaking his entire manifesto to draven to actually pull the trigger
draven freaked tf out with blood all over his face
more guards
sitting with draven in his room while draven sleeps
volta using liam as the new face of the company
bringing 3rd dravenchild to see her father

non plot focused pages:

multiple pages about being awake at night
falling asleep on elise's lap
shipping out the $50k cheki to "hina draven" home address
liam trying to fight volta at different ages
detecting and removing pafa from the mansion
draven to pafa: "you're always welcome here. you're like a son to me" then telling volta to remove him after pafa leaves the room
multiple pages of draven calling his son worthless
draven's 3rd wiped manslaughter charge from drunk driving
driving grumpy draven
being tired
draven complaining about how the gardener is retarded
the gardener growing tomatoes and serving them to draven

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non plot focused pages:

crying online
pafa trying to stay the night at alois's apartment to hide from his mom and regretting it. alois's tiny room covered in cut outs and photos of liam
staying at liam's condo, regretting it.
getting kicked out of the draven mansion
working at the cafe
drinking with liam

Needs:

start with a kiss because WHY NOT
alois using "squatter's rights" to not leave liam's abandoned apartment. waiting pages
pafa tells alois that liam bought a ring (it's a lie, but thats a secret between you and me)
a few pages of panic and dooming that lead to deciding to approach liam

non plot focused pages:

alois's tiny room covered in cut outs and photos of liam
pafa trying to stay the night away from his mother and regretting it
working at the bakery
going to the cafe to see pafa, ordering off menu, being noticed by the girls crushing on pafa
making friends with the cafe girls
chatting in Pafa's room

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No story only jokes. maybe sprinkle throughout p4

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